Jules the jester

I liked it, very interesting. It does show the feeling of utter and complete hoplesness the character is feeling. The last snetance didnt sit too well with me, i dont ...

I must apoligise in my tardiness for Criting. And due to this i havent got much to say but... BRILLIANT!!! Although i would like to see more of the parents. ...

that was good. I spoteed one spelling. masted Think that is suppose to be Mastered Other than that i can just repeat what gadi said. Tell us why the people ...

chilling. But very good. Everyone else has crtitted before me so i dont have anything to write except it was very good. some errors here and there but nothing too ...

the whole epilougue was terrible. I read one of the pages and didnt like it, a week later and i did finish reading it. The last line. Disgustingly bad. J.K ...

very hard hitting. I was shocked. And your writing has improved like alainna said if you look at teh old Cubes stuff and the new cubes it is very better ...

Yeah someone should start s usuergroupd for terry Pratchett. I just love everyone of his books(that i have read). Men At Arms and Guards Guards are my favourite. Well truly ...

Very short but i enjoyed it as always. Look forward to the next part. Though i do still hate chris :evil: :evil: I dislike chris. But i dislike his mother. ...

Strange and short. which is good for me as i cannot abide reading long poetry. I enjoyed it, gave me the feeling of being alone at night and thinking about ...

Yeah, woop. I had been looking forward to this for a while and it did not dissapoint. Well done. I have become hooked. The way you switch from how she ...

Peter woke up in his tent in the morning Instead of this perhaps say. Groaning Peter awoke. the tent was cold and his blankets hadnt doen a good job at ...

I loved it. I want to be a music Journalist and always enjoy reading others accounts of gigs. I live in a particully sleepy area of devon where not many ...

As always i enjoyed it. Really hooked into this story. And doing weird things in history. Always a favourite. Me and my friend turned our teachers desk around. Took him ...

Your writing reminds me of Terry Pratchett so much. I enoyed reading this. made me chuckle a happy chuckle. Look forward to more. :D :D :D :D :shock: :D :D ...

Have you read Sonnet 130 by Shakespeare?? I liked this. I aint much of a poetry boff so i dont really know what to point out and stuff but i ...